Tales of Onyx (On Hiatus)
Public Version 2.3 / Patreon Version 2.6
Hi all!
Public Version 2.3 is out now- Chapter Eight. Now the puzzles are starting to piece altogether, slowly.
Patreon Version 2.6 is out as well- Including Chapter Ten AND Gary's backstory.
What changed?
- Grammar fixes for Prologue through Chapter Four.
- NEW backgrounds at the beginning of Prologue.
That's it! Enjoy reading, y'all. ^_^
Comments
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Huh, with the grammar fixes I’m going to give this a try again, I’m pretty hopeful about this
Thanks! ^_^
Let me know if it doesn't meet your expectations. I hope to hire a editor to our team one day, budget wise. :)
It doesn’t.
I’m ignoring awkward sentences and all the exposition, since this update was meant to be fixing grammar, but even in just the prologue there’s still quite a few very noticeable ‘grammar problems’.
There’s even a couple that I already mentioned to you, so I’m doubly perplexed on how that could be. I assumed they were there because nobody on the team had ever re-read the script, but now it has gone through some manner of review and there still are some mistakes I’m genuinely baffeled were not caught.
I’m going to write about them in the grammar channel of the discord server.
Thank you! Haz (Our sprite/CG artist) kindly volunteered to work most of the grammar fixes on Prologue section.
I'll be posting a position within our team and hire a editor sometimes soon. :)